Great work this week Isabella! I like how you made sure this was a quality blog post and that you changed the theme of your slideshow so it was unique. I really enjoyed seeing your maths thinking for this weeks maths tasks.
The planning slide for your mini beast is fantastic, I can tell you thought hard about the creature you were going to create. The moncararest sounds both terrifying but also nice. I like how it does good things such as eating pests and helping plants grow. Maybe next time in your description you could describe what its skin feels like (example: rough, slimy, smooth...)
I like how your writing included a good descriptin about the moncararest, however the writing task for this week was focussed on going on an adventure with your mini beast and then encountering a problem.
Hi Isabella ,My name is Sofia ,I like your mini best you made it is very strange but I like it.I like how it eats pest's But Is it a pest? and what are it's predators.
I like how you made your own slides and didn't copy the other one. I also like how you kept your maths working out simple and not to confusing. Mabye next time you could use a differnt background colour that isnt white?
Great work this week Isabella! I like how you made sure this was a quality blog post and that you changed the theme of your slideshow so it was unique.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed seeing your maths thinking for this weeks maths tasks.
The planning slide for your mini beast is fantastic, I can tell you thought hard about the creature you were going to create. The moncararest sounds both terrifying but also nice. I like how it does good things such as eating pests and helping plants grow. Maybe next time in your description you could describe what its skin feels like (example: rough, slimy, smooth...)
I like how your writing included a good descriptin about the moncararest, however the writing task for this week was focussed on going on an adventure with your mini beast and then encountering a problem.
Hi Isabella ,My name is Sofia ,I like your mini best you made it is very strange but I like it.I like how it eats pest's But Is it a pest? and what are it's predators.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you made your own slides and didn't copy the other one. I also like how you kept your maths working out simple and not to confusing. Mabye next time you could use a differnt background colour that isnt white?
hi i liked how you put your working out for the maths slides and made it clear for people to read
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