Fantastic work this week Isabella. I really like the DLO you made about a balanced diet and that you included information about different serving sizes. I also love your piece of writing this week. I think you had a really awesome idea by include COVID-19 in your narrative and that was the reason everyone had to become vegetarian. I hope you continue to write awesome stories.
One thing you could work on is the statement you make about your learning at the beginning of your blog post. For example you could have written: "Here is my work this week, we focussed on having a balanced diet and what the different food groups are."
Fantastic work this week Isabella. I really like the DLO you made about a balanced diet and that you included information about different serving sizes.
ReplyDeleteI also love your piece of writing this week. I think you had a really awesome idea by include COVID-19 in your narrative and that was the reason everyone had to become vegetarian. I hope you continue to write awesome stories.
One thing you could work on is the statement you make about your learning at the beginning of your blog post. For example you could have written: "Here is my work this week, we focussed on having a balanced diet and what the different food groups are."