change the bell

I was learning to use research to extend my ideas.

I enjoyed thinking up ideas of what to write.

 

Dear Mr Tetzlaff 

I'm writing to you today because I think it is time to make a change to the old school bell.

For part of my school work I had to read a text about a school in salford that had replaced it's Bell with music and I thought it's that it is an excellent idea so I wrote this letter to you to ask if we could change the old school bell.

here are some reasons why we should change the Bell. If the old bell rings too loud it can damaged people's ears. music lightens the mood and sets a beat to move to.

people can put in a request for a song. Before the song there would be a speaker that tells everybody what the song is who made it and the person who requested it.

I know that it is expensive to change the bell 

 so we could have a fundraiser to raise the money needed.

 yours truly Isabella

would you like to change the bell to music why?