Tuesday, September 17, 2019

The flight to planet marsh


I have been learning to edit photos.

I enjoyed writing

What do you think will happen next ?



 One foggy night when the wind was cold Elizabeth hopped in her bed and she fell asleep Quite fast.( Well she had had a very busy day) She had a very very crazy dream she had a dream that she was walking around in the forest and then and then there was a lake she went down cause she was quite sad cause she thought she was lost and then she slept and she fell in the lake mean while in the lake she met a little turtle in the middle of the lake.But Oh no the little girl gets caught in the very in the very rough  tide she hold on to the turtle tight and then they go into another part of the forest That part of the  forest really sunny and nice and there's lots of baby animals and then theThe lake finally  stops.Elizabeth looks at the  poor baby  turtle  She takes off her bag and  look for  the...                                                                                                                                   

3 comments:

  1. hi I loved your story it was amazing. you are such a awesome writter. you should make more storys like this one. next time you should make a movie.
    From Jahn

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  2. Thank you for your good advice. What kind of story do you think I should
    write nekst?

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