Manraj has dark chocolate hair colour .
She has swilling blackish brown eyes.
Wive light brown skin .
Manraj is kind and will always let new friends play.
If you get if you get hurt she will help you back up. she will be exquisite art.
She is loving and is one of the very best friend You can get.
by your side forever.
Manraj is creative. She makes.
Hi Isabella this is Mrs Cameron, I am with the rest of your class at the moment and we have just read through your descriptive writing about Manraj. We love the way you described your friend, so that we could picture it in our minds. I especially like the 'swilling blackish brown eyes' bit. Did you leave the last line short on purpose? It made us all wonder what Manraj makes! Could you tell us what she makes in your reply? We miss you at school today.
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Deletemaybe describe more like like creative i realy like how you said dark chocolate hair and light brown skin
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